Confu Sion

It's too easy to loveyou

Everyone does

Must you capture me too?

I lie, defenseless, waiting

To see

I think

You shall never conquer me.

Coldness invades Confusion reigns Fleeting glances Words words words

Deny me cast me off

Renounce your dear Resume your lordship. Resume.

I don't recall help me forget help me remove the memories make me unscathed and unadulerated powerfull and untested. I shall ramble merrily along Having much too much fun Like we did that night I shall frolic never looking back O where are you tonight?

Unknown And untasted Unimportant Like an ant you crush me Without thinking. I lie Crush ed A corpse living looking up Great and mighty one You crush me unknowingly Art thou gentle or rough?

 Slave am I, Queen am I not, she doth I serve, more often than naught,
 Go whither am bid, do what I am told, made for the living, living not bold
 To sleep in the sunshine, is not my fate, to gather the flowers, mmy task
of late,
 Unthinking unfeeling, child am I, unknowing but blissfull, never to die
 I think this describeth me, now I find not, such creature'd not know it, I
know too much.

 where you are

 why
 why

 how could you
 make me believe that
 that
 i cannot say it
 but you know

 you chill me
 abandon me
 kill me
 but i am too strong and cannot be killed

 so i must live
 dying
 living
 harder
 and harder
 and loving
 you

 raincoat
 covering everything
 for the present
 raincoat
 making dry what should be wet
 holding down what should be free
 making thou unknown to me

 raincoat
 pretty
 nice
 plastically fake

 would thou were 
 a robe of rain.

 i hate you.
 i mean that.
 you are too dreadfull/for i fill with dread at the thought of you.
 you are frightening and unreal/unemotion and too emotional for me
 why do you not hold me only
 why dost thou speak
 and in speaking
 lie
 and in lying
 deceive
 me
 in such a way
 you are not good for me
 i should leave you now
 but i cannot
 for i am truly bound.

 damme me for a fool
 for believing i could put it rightly
 damme me, go ahead
 you have the perfect right
 for i do deserve it
 not for what i have done
 or undone
 but for my foolishness
 damme.
 for i blame him
 of my life
 ruiner
 making me foolish and the mother of fools
 begetting foolishness eternally
 completely awkward
 utterly graceless
 awefully awefull.

Shattered, broken, Fate has spoken, N'ere' to call / my name again Sadly weeping, love is sleeping Dawn shall never shine again

 i love you
 can't you tell?
 don't you feel it?
 don't you
 return the sentiment

 you don't
 i know
 i hate it
 
 but

 i know

 i don't love you 
 mayhap
 but i would greatly appreciate
 something
 anything
 rather than sitting, squandering this moment
 won't you hold me now.
 come.

 Beautifull magic, unnaturall things
 Stuff of the fairies, listen to kings
 See what you will, now, nothing else lives
 Light for tomorrow, glide for the live.

Life goes on going living loving sparkling in the sun I am the sun I am; confusion about Love within swirling mysterious enraptured Face.

Nonsensically yours am I for the reading to understand me is to be me, knowing me and dispassionately gauging me. Good luck, thee Reviewers! Wind at nbtsc.org

gorgeous, love, gorgeous. i love your writing. "would thou were a robe of rain." *shivers* glitterpixie

I hope you don't mind a little constructive critiscism here, since I think I have some to offer for once. Ok- it's not going to go on my list of all time greatest verse, but you have some very powerful images in there, and you write what your feeling (I assume) and do so in a way that others can understand. That's a good thing. Is the line supposed to be "Light for tomorrow, glide for the live"? or was it ment to be "guide"? either was I like it, my logical brain just trys to twist it the way it is. - Lorin

• I meant glide, tho guide makes more sense...but then, who wants to make sense out of life?